My first New Adult title, a Victorian dark fantasy called THE HEARTBEAT THIEF, has made another step toward release. I've written my blurb. :)
Admittedly, I had gotten quite distracted with the art work... I absolutely love this imagery because it captures everything I put into the story. The beautiful debutante. The eerie, gothic elements. The sense of seduction and magic. I wanted to create a cover that strikes the chords of the soul even before the first pages are read.
This cover does it for me, over and over again.
The cover isn't the only element of a book's production, however entertaining it can be. You can't just write a story, dress it in a gorgeous cover, and send it out to the world. There are several other steps that have to be checked off, one by one, before that book goes public.
One step is editing/revising, with a big part of that being the employment of advanced readers. I'm fortunate to have some very talented readers and writers take a crack at this book, and am waiting to hear back from a few others. So far, the response has been enormously helpful... and phenomenally positive. With each round of beta reader comments, the book gets honed and polished and perfected, and I wake up each day feeling more enthusiastic about this book than I had the day before. Thank you, my precious beta readers!
The latest step is one that I wanted to share with you today... the blurb.
Now, I'd already settled on my hook line, and have even come up with the comparative statement that I used to lure my beta readers into reading it. How is it that I haven't done the blurb yet?
Answer:
A) Haven't needed one yet
B) Haven't gotten that far on the to-do list yet
C) It's ridiculously difficult to sum up an entire book in a few catchy paragraphs
D) All of the above
Writing a blurb is an essential step toward a book's release. It's the description that goes on the back of print books, as well as what a reader sees when they come across the book on a retail website. Not only does it have to written, it has to be good enough to make a reader say "I want to know MORE."
It also has to accurately reflect what the story is all about. In the past, I wrote blurbs early on in a book's development, only to realize that once the book was finished, it looked nothing like that original blurb.
No wonder I moved "Write the Blurb" downward on the to-do list. :)
So, here is the long-awaited blurb...
THE HEARTBEAT THIEF by AJ KRAFTON
Haunted by a crushing fear of death, a young Victorian woman discovers the secret of eternal youth—she must surrender her life to attain it, and steal heartbeats to keep it.
In 1860 Surrey, a young woman has only one occupation: to marry. Senza Fyne is beautiful, intelligent, and lacks neither wealth nor connections. Finding a husband shouldn’t be difficult, not when she has her entire life before her. But it’s not life that preoccupies her thoughts. It’s death—and that shadowy spectre haunts her every step.
So does Mr. Knell. Heart-thumpingly attractive, obviously eligible—he’d be her perfect match if only he wasn’t so macabre. All his talk about death, all that teasing about knowing how to avoid it…
When her mother arranges a courtship with another man, Senza is desperate for escape from a dull prescripted destiny. Impulsively, she takes Knell up on his offer. He casts a spell that frees her from the cruelty of time and the threat of death—but at a steep price. In order to maintain eternal youth, she must feed on the heartbeats of others.
It’s a little bit Jane Austen, a little bit Edgar Allan Poe, and a whole lot of stealing heartbeats in order to stay young and beautiful forever. From the posh London season to the back alleys of Whitechapel…across the Channel, across the Pond, across the seas of Time…
How far will Senza Fyne go to avoid Death?
So... that's my book, in less than 250 words. Does it make you want to know more? I'd love to hear what you think.
Wednesday, February 25, 2015
Monday, January 19, 2015
Bollywood, Books, & Giveaways: Sonali Dev and Susan Kaye Quinn!
Romance and Intrigue: Bollywood Style Giveaway
Something Bollywood Going On Here
Sonali Dev and Susan Kaye Quinn met in a most unusual place: Library Journal's Top 10 E-Romance List for 2014. Sonali's A Bollywood Affair and Susan's Third Daughter both made the list with their Bollywood-themed romances - something that was so cool, it cried out to be celebrated!
Scroll down to win some great Bollywood-themed prizes!
Contemporary and Steampunk Bollywood Romance
A Bollywood Affair by Sonali Dev
Mili Rathod hasn’t seen her husband in twenty years—not since she was promised to him at the age of four. Yet marriage has allowed Mili a freedom rarely given to girls in her village. Her grandmother has even allowed her to leave India and study in America for eight months, all to make her the perfect modern wife. Which is exactly what Mili longs to be—if her husband would just come and claim her.
Bollywood’s favorite director, Samir Rathod, has come to Michigan to secure a divorce for his older brother. Persuading a naïve village girl to sign the papers should be easy for someone with Samir’s tabloid-famous charm. But Mili is neither a fool nor a gold-digger. Open-hearted yet complex, she’s trying to reconcile her independence with cherished traditions. And before he can stop himself, Samir is immersed in Mili’s life—cooking her dal and rotis, escorting her to her roommate’s elaborate Indian wedding, and wondering where his loyalties and happiness lie.
Third Daughter (The Dharian Affairs #1) by Susan Kaye Quinn
The Third Daughter of the Queen wants to her birthday to arrive so she'll be free to marry for love, but rumors of a new flying weapon may force her to accept a barbarian prince's proposal for a peace-brokering marriage. Desperate to marry the charming courtesan she loves, Aniri agrees to the prince's proposal as a subterfuge in order to spy on him, find the weapon, and hopefully avoid both war and an arranged marriage to a man she does not love.
Third Daughter is the first book in the Dharian Affairs Trilogy (Third Daughter, Second Daughter, First Daughter). This steampunk-goes-to-Bollywood (Bollypunk!) romance takes place in an east-indian-flavored alternate world filled with skyships, saber duels, and lots of royal intrigue. And, of course, kissing.
Romance and Intrigue: Bollywood Style
This short Q&A with Sonali and Susan talks about marrying for love and writing romance!
Q: Marrying for love is a modern, and in some ways Western, concept, but arranged marriages have a long and complicated history. How does your novel tackle the subject of arranged marriage?
Sue: Third Daughter is set in a fantasy world, but it’s a blend of cultures in the real one, including being an analog to India (both current day and some of the past). In the Dharian Affairs world, royal marriages have a history of being arranged for political purposes, but the general population of the countries marry for love. This leaves the titular Daughters with varying conflicts between marrying for duty and marrying for love – some embracing their arranged marriages, some fighting against it. The marriage dynamics of the three daughters in the trilogy (Third Daughter, Second Daughter, First Daughter) drive much of the story – along with political intrigue and skyships, of course!
Sonali: In India where I grew up arranged marriages are still very much a part of the fabric of the culture. Having said that, one of the most interesting and unique things about Indian society is how diverse it is within itself. While you still have communities and families who will give the marrying person absolutely no say in whom they marry there are those who don't believe their parents and families have any say when it comes to whom they choose to marry or live with, and then there is the rest of the sizable population who falls somewhere between those two belief systems. In A Bollywood Affair, Mili is from a tiny village from a very orthodox family and it is perfectly natural that her family would arrange her marriage. She would expect that. It wouldn't even strike a girl from her background that she could choose for herself. The age at which she was married isn't usual, though, but there is a reason why her grandmother gets her married that young. As for her being in love with her husband, again, the conditioning to be devoted to your husband is so ingrained in the culture that it would be strange if someone like Mili didn't love someone she believed was her husband.
Q: Whether set in a fantasy world or the modern one, romance is romance! There are many romance tropes – star-crossed lovers, lovers thrown together by circumstance, enemies turned lovers – what kind(s) of romance tropes does your novel contain?
Sue: My books are really a blend of romance and adventure, although the first book is a classic “lovers thrown together by circumstance” as Aniri (the Third Daughter) goes undercover in accepting a marriage proposal from the barbarian prince in the north in order to spy on him and determine if his country truly has the rumored flying machine that would upend the political dynamics in both their countries.
Sonali: Although I didn't set out to write it that way, several readers have pointed out that A Bollywood Affair is a Worldly Rake and an Ingenue Virgin trope. And now that I think about it, there's truth to that.
Q: Are you planning on writing more romances in this story-world? If so, tell us about it!
Sue: The Dharian Affairs trilogy is complete, but I’ve enjoyed writing in this east-Indian steampunk fantasy romance world so much, I’ve decided to do a follow-on trilogy from the point of view of a new character—a female tinker who has a grand invention that may change the world, but also is caught between the spy she might love and the spy she can’t resist. Those books likely won’t be written for a year or two, but I will cycle back to writing in this world in the future!
Sonali: The Bollywood Bride comes out next year and it's the story of a Bollywood star who comes home to Chicago after ten years to escape a scandal in Mumbai and comes face to face with the man she betrayed for stardom. And then there are two more stories I'm working on in the same series. Which isn't a series in terms of continuity or overlapping characters but because the stories are set in the same world and either the hero or the heroine work in Bollywood.
Monday, December 8, 2014
The Benders: Breeders #3 by Katie French #YA #Dystopian
Today we have a special guest... Infinite Ink's very own Katie French! She's promoting her new book and was nice enough to stop to make her apologies for breaking the Rule of Three. (Honestly, I detect sarcasm.)
How to Apologize for
your Series not Being a Trilogy
By Katie French
I’ll admit it here before God and everybody: I broke a
cardinal rule of the dystopian series. I did not write a trilogy. Now, once the
audible gasp of horror settles down, I want to take a moment to defend myself.
My series, The Breeders, will not be ending after my latest installment
releases. The reasons for this are legion, but I will give you my favorite. I
love a long series. The two best series in my book are The Dark Tower by Stephen
King and Harry Potter by J.K.
Rowling. If you haven’t read them, crawl out of your nuclear bomb shelter and
head to your local library. If you have read them, you know what a long series
can do to a person. Reading these books
changed me, for good or ill, only my husband can be the judge. But a long
series give the reader time to form some serious bonds with the characters. I
wanted that for my readers.
However, I know that some readers will be disappointed when
they get to the end of book three and see there is no neat, red-ribbon ending.
So, I’ve compiled a list of things I will say to them to excuse my egregious
disdain for modern dystopianism.
Tactic 1 – Denial:
“What do you mean the series didn’t end with book three? I can’t believe they’d
mess up like that. Well, that’s what you get when you rely on Amazon. You know
those money-hungry fools are always trying to gouge the little man.”
Tactic 2 –
Distraction: “What? Oh, my series? It didn’t end? Speaking of series, did
you hear that on the next season of Orange
is the New Black that Crazy Eyes and Piper get married? No, really it’s
true. I heard it on Access Hollywood.”
Tactic 3 – The
“Justin Beiber”: “Yeah, so my series isn’t a trilogy. Who cares? I’ve got
good hair and chicks dig me. If I call you baby with my eyes half-lidded,
you’ll forget your last name.”
Tactic 4 – Saying
Sorry: “I’m sorry that you’ll have to read more heart-pounding,
page-turning books. Imagine all the levels of Candy Crush you’ll miss reading
more of my stuff.”
Tactic 5 – Honesty: “I want to give you more in Riley’s world.
Stick around. It’s going to be a hell of a ride.”
All jokes aside, I hope you like book three enough to read
book four. And really, if we love books and the characters that inhabit them,
don’t we wish for more? What I wouldn’t give for another Harry Potter book or
another ride with Roland toward the Dark Tower. I hope that someday someone
feels the same way about my books. I hope I don’t let them down.
The Benders:
The third book in the award-winning, best-selling dystopian
series, The Breeders.
They’ve escaped the Breeders.
They’ve broken out of the Citadel.
Now, after all they’ve been through, Riley,
Clay, and Ethan know one thing for sure: nothing tastes sweeter than freedom.
And no one can rest easy with Auntie Bell in bondage. The group journeys home to rescue
her and liberate Clay’s town from the cruel Warden. But when an ally betrays
them, they must face the very enemy they’ve been trying to avoid.
Captured and separated, Riley is sold to a
slave-owner who uses human beings for sport, while Clay and Ethan become the
latest in a series of lab rats to be poked and prodded. As a slave, Riley
conceals her identity to survive among the other benders, but it’s only a
matter of time before a dangerous job takes her life. Clay and Ethan find
themselves a war zone between a madwoman and marauders. And the odds don’t look
good.
"Thrilling, chilling, and creepy in all the right ways, The Benders will more than satiate French's fans!" --S.K. Falls, bestselling dystopian author of World of Shell and Bone
“A full throttle race to the finish, The Benders is electrifying. The third book in The Breeders Series only made me hungrier for the next.” --Kimberly Shursen, author of thrillers HUSH, Lottery and Itsy Bitsy Spider
"Once again, the characters you know and love are in peril. Don’t pick up The Benders if you have an appointment to make or a train to catch." --Amy R. Biddle, author of The Atheist's Prayer
Katie French imagined herself an author when her poem caught the eye of her second grade teacher. It was about birds and frankly, it wasn't very good, but it sparked a love of literature. In middle school she spent her free time locked in her room, writing her first young adult novel. This thoroughly solidifying her status as a class-A nerd. She currently works as a high school English teacher, a job that she loves even when it exhausts her. In her free time she writes, reads great books, and takes care of her two beautiful and crazy children. She is represented by Amanda Luedeke of MacGregor Literary. Her young adult best selling series, The Breeders, is available now on Amazon.
Check out her Blog / Find her on Facebook / Holla at her on Twitter / Find her books on Amazon / Find her on GoodReads
Wednesday, October 8, 2014
Book Blast & Giveaway...Celebrate with the Inklings!
Happy Birthday to one of my favorite groups of authors... the Infinite Inklings!
We're celebrating with a book blast and giveaway.
AND YOU'RE INVITED! :)
We're celebrating with a book blast and giveaway.
AND YOU'RE INVITED! :)
~ Treehugger ~
~ The Torturer’s Daughter ~
~ Contributor ~
~ Fevered Souls ~
~ The Breeders ~
~ The Scourge ~
~ Daynight ~
~ Virulent ~
~ Kea Alwang ~
Facebook | Twitter | GoodReads | Website | Mailing List
~ Zoe Cannon ~
~ Nicole Ciacchella ~
~ SK Falls ~
~ Katie French ~
Amazon Author Page | Facebook | Twitter | GoodReads | Blog
~ AG Henley ~
Amazon Author Page | Facebook | Twitter | GoodReads | Website | Newsletter
~ Ash Krafton ~
~ Megan Thomason ~
~ Shelbi Wescott ~
Amazon Author Page | Facebook | Twitter | GoodReads | Tumblr
Giveaway Details:
There is a tour wide giveaway. Prizes include the following:
- $10 Amazon gift card (INT)
- Winner’s choice of a Kindle Fire HD or Kindle Paperwhite (US only) or if winner is INT, winner’s choice of $119 PayPal Cash or Amazon gift card.
Please note that Juniper Grove Book Solutions is not responsible for the handling/sending of the Kindle giveaway.
Wednesday, July 2, 2014
Instigator: Contributor #3 by Nicole Ciacchella #ya #dystopian
Book Description
The final book in the post-apocalyptic and dystopian young adult/new adult Contributor trilogy.
Disillusioned and angry at the revelation of the Free Thinkers’ secret patron, Dara isn’t sure whether her decision to join them was the right choice. Guilt over Letizia’s loss plagues her, and she feels betrayed by one of the few people in whom she placed her trust.
Adjusting to life outside of the domes hasn’t been easy over the past six months, especially because the Free Thinkers’ progress is so frustratingly slow. Nothing has changed, and she doesn’t know how much longer she can deny her searing need for vengeance, or even whether she should place her faith in the Free Thinkers. The more the truth about both them and the Creators is revealed, the less certain she is that the two are all that different. What if she handed them the incriminating evidence they need to exploit to ensure a future that looks a lot like what the Creators envisioned?
Yet Dara has never been more certain of one thing: the Creators must pay—for what they did to her mother, for what they did to Letizia, and for what they’ve done to humanity.
Excerpt
“Storm coming?” Javier asked, joining her. He folded his arms over his chest, adopting his usual carefree expression and posture, but she’d come to know he wore it like a mask. Almost everything he did was calculated, and behind his placid exterior was a mind rarely at rest.
“I don’t think so,” she said after studying the sky for a moment longer. Conditions didn’t feel quite right for the vicious dust storms that ripped through the area with surprising frequency but little warning. She had developed a healthy respect for them; they were not to be messed with.
“Another sabotage mission completed,” he remarked. He sounded as if he were satisfied with a day’s work well done, but she heard a note of something in his voice, a note that mirrored the disquiet in her own head.
“Prick, prick, prick,” she said, unable to keep the sarcasm from her tone. “Think the Creators will bleed to death anytime soon?”
He smiled. “Doubtful. Still, I guess we are annoying them and setting back their master plan. They can’t be too happy with us about that.”
“So they have to wait for their toys. Poor dears.” Disdain dripped from her words, but the thought didn’t make her feel any better. Who cared if they inconvenienced the Creators?
Inconveniencing them was the least of what she’d had in mind.
“The time isn’t right. You must be patient,” he said, mimicking Mal’s tight voice, making Dara smile despite herself.
“I’m really sick of that word.”
“You’re not alone there.”
“Do you think an actual plan exists?”
“Depends on which day of the week it is,” he said, giving her a crooked smile. He leaned against a rusting beam, seeming unconcerned about it crumbling under his weight. “I know they have plenty of plans, I’m just not sure what those plans are and whether they’re the plans I’d like them to be.”
“Raj keeps telling me we can’t be rash.”
“Inertia. I thought the Creators were the only ones who suffered from it. Looks like I was wrong
about that.”
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| Nicole Ciacchella |
About the Author
Nicole has progressed from scribbling in notebooks to banging on keyboards, but she's never managed to stop daydreaming at inappropriate moments.
When not answering the demands of her characters, Nicole can often be found curled up with a good book or spending far too many hours acting the hero in whatever video game is her obsession of the moment.
One of Nicole's other great passions is travel. She loves being married to a native Belgian, both because she likes the idea of being "The American" and because it gives her plenty of excuses to visit Europe—that wondrous land of coffee, chocolate, pastry, and some other stuff—as often as possible.
Michigan born and raised, Nicole lives there with her honorary Michigander/Belgian husband and her two children. A Michigan State University alum, Nicole bleeds green and is a Spartan for life.
Monday, May 26, 2014
New Release: No Return by Zoe Cannon
At last--
the newest Internal Defense novel from
YA author Zoe Cannon!
No Return
The conclusion to the Internal Defense
series
Amazon | Barnes
& Noble | Kobo
| Smashwords | paperback
Add it to your Goodreads
shelves here
Every dissident
knows about Becca Dalcourt.
They know about the lives she’s saved. About the prison break she carried out against impossible odds. They know she turned a dying resistance into the first real threat Internal Defense has faced in a long time.
And even now, with the resistance under attack from the inside, they know Becca can save them.
They’re wrong.
The conclusion to the story that began with The Torturer’s Daughter and Necessary Sacrifices, No Return explores what happens when an ordinary person becomes a legend – and how to choose between who you are and who the world needs you to be.
They know about the lives she’s saved. About the prison break she carried out against impossible odds. They know she turned a dying resistance into the first real threat Internal Defense has faced in a long time.
And even now, with the resistance under attack from the inside, they know Becca can save them.
They’re wrong.
The conclusion to the story that began with The Torturer’s Daughter and Necessary Sacrifices, No Return explores what happens when an ordinary person becomes a legend – and how to choose between who you are and who the world needs you to be.
Zoe Cannon writes about the things that fascinate her: outsiders, societies no sane person would want to live in, questions with no easy answers, and the inner workings of the mind. If she couldn't be a writer, she would probably be a psychologist, a penniless philosopher, or a hermit in a cave somewhere. While she'll read anything that isn't nailed down, she considers herself a YA reader and writer at heart. She lives in New Hampshire with her husband and a giant teddy bear of a dog, and spends entirely too much time on the internet.Monday, April 7, 2014
Need A Reason to Join a Writers Collective?
If you do, well, we have seven, and that's just off the top of our heads!
Stop by the Ink Spells Blog--home of the amazing Susan Kaye Quinn--and read a guest post from the Infinite Inklings. We have found so many wonderful things abound banding together that we just had to share. :)
We're discussing why we benefit from forming a writers collective, from promotional efforts to personal support.
Of course, we didn't mention the Torturous Pants on Amazon... but I think that little tidbit would neatly fit under #7 on the list.
Stop by and leave a comment--we'd all appreciate it!
Stop by the Ink Spells Blog--home of the amazing Susan Kaye Quinn--and read a guest post from the Infinite Inklings. We have found so many wonderful things abound banding together that we just had to share. :)
We're discussing why we benefit from forming a writers collective, from promotional efforts to personal support.
Of course, we didn't mention the Torturous Pants on Amazon... but I think that little tidbit would neatly fit under #7 on the list.
Stop by and leave a comment--we'd all appreciate it!
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